Monday, August 5, 2013

WIP On a Stick

I wrote on vacation.

My goal was to write 10,000 words, but then beautiful weather happened.  And a boat (with a tube to be dragged in!)  Amazing beach conditions (read: no jellyfish!) And lots of people I haven't seen in years.  And the ever-hopeful (but false) notion that I can beat my sister in a Quiddler tournament.  And a hilarious game called Hedbandz.  Reading had to be done: Moon Over Manifest and half of Bring Up the Bodies. Oh, and my sister's dog needed to be walked on the beach while she did most of the cooking.  All that hake and all those mussels, steamers, oysters and scallops needed to be eaten.  Downton Abbey, Season Three needed to be watched (hated the ending and I don't care if it's a spoiler alert for the four people on the planet who haven't seen it yet) and lots of sleeping and napping had to be attended to.

So you see, I was busy.

But I was also profoundly glad my sister brought her laptop and I brought my WIP on a stick. I did manage 3,000 words, and the story is falling into place in a way I would not have imagined.  All the dead ends, discarded prologues and stripped out exposition have only served to enrich the world I'm building in my own mind.  None of the writing I've done over the last four years has gone to waste— just as in life, no experience goes to waste. I've lived with this story for so long now that I feel like I'm writing from my own experiences within the story. I don't know if I can explain it any better than that. It's probably what most writers can attest to ... it just took me a long while to get there.

Also, my sister turned out to be a wonderful critiquer. "Rosemary, you can read what you have to me ONCE.  I'll tell you what I think."  And she did.  She's an avid reader and everything she had to say was right on.

Today is a glorious day in New England.  Intensely blue sky, comfortable temperature and breezes ... much more like a summer day on Prince Edward Island than a summer day here in the Connecticut river valley. Early August is often brutal with lots of humidity and heat. Sometimes even the violent late-afternoon thunderstorms can do little to mitigate the misery.  But not today. It is truly lovely. I am headed over to the Ethel Walker School in Simsbury to see Marcie ride her sister Annie's horse in a Daniel Stewart riding clinic.  I can't imagine a nicer way to spend an afternoon.

Except for maybe whipping out my WIP on a stick, firing up the laptop and writing out on the porch.
What makes a Boston Whaler even more awesome? A tube and tow rope!

Writer's retreat as seen from the boat. Also the home of the North Shore Quiddler Tournament.

Crowded beach day.  There are approximately 10 or 11 people wandering around.

My front yard. Sunsets are time consuming, as well.

6 comments:

  1. So gorgeous! And congratulations on the 3K! I bet you got even more thinking than writing done, with scenery like that to inspire!

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    1. We have to figure out a way to get you guys up there. Nancy and I had planned a trip together to the Island when my last child was "launched." Sad for me but not for her because, PEI (as lovely as it is) is still this side of the dark glass.

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  2. I'd say you had a lovely writing vacation and what a bonus to have a sister like yours. I tell you, the best things in life are the useless, time-consuming things ...

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    1. So true, Vijaya, because those things "are" for their own sakes. Connecticut is a truly lovely state, but my eyes got accustomed to seeing miles and miles and miles right out the front window. Now I feel like I'm peeking around corners. A lovely young writer from the Windsor Writers Critique Group, Raka Sunderland, gave me this line to use in a short story: "stunted horizons." I feel like I'm on an eyeball diet.

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  3. We shall find a mountain for you to climb and gaze from. And thank goodness for the WIP on a stick - 3,000 words are still 3,000 words. Congratulations!

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    1. Oh, heavens, Lynn ... it's the whole big, shiny ocean bit, as well. "Ain't no mountain high enough" (except maybe a fjord, or something.)

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